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Planning and writing text messages and emails

This guide explains when to send emails and text messages to your users and how to write them.

When to send emails and text messages

Always consider whether you can send an email or text message instead of a letter. If a user doesn鈥檛 respond, you may still be able to follow up with a letter.

Some information is too sensitive to be sent by email or text. You should consider this and discuss anything you鈥檙e not sure about with your information assurance team.

Only send email or text messages when it meets a user need. Two types of message that meet a user need are transactional messages and subscription messages.

Transactional messages

Transactional messages relate directly to something a user has done. For example:

  • they completed a transaction, and you鈥檙e sending them a confirmation email
  • they paid for an annual service a year ago, and you鈥檙e reminding them that it鈥檚 about to expire
  • their application has been approved, and you鈥檙e sending them a text message to let them know

Transactional messages reassure the user that the service is working as they expect it to. They reduce anxiety and stop users contacting your service needlessly.

Look at your service end to end and find the points where users are likely to get anxious. Talk to your contact centre staff to find out why people are contacting you.

If you鈥檙e sending an email or text message because the user has completed an action, automate the sending so that the user gets it straight away. That way they will know they鈥檝e been successful.

If a message doesn鈥檛 need to be sent immediately, consider sending it during business hours as it鈥檚 more likely to be read. If possible, avoid sending text messages late at night.

You don鈥檛 need to ask permission to send transactional messages. Make it clear to users when you collect any details that you may use them for sending messages.

Example of a transactional message

Transport for London鈥檚 Dial-a-Ride service sends users the following text message to confirm the details of a booking:

Dial-a-Ride: Your vehicle will arrive in approximately [number of minutes] at [time of day] on [date]. Your driver today is [driver name].

Subscription messages

Subscription messages relate to something a user has asked to be updated about - for example, the publication of new information or changes to government guidance.

Never send subscription messages unless the user has explicitly asked for them - for example, by signing up for alerts. Always give users a way to unsubscribe.

Example of a subscription message

Users who sign up to be notified when their MOT is about to expire receive the following email:

From: MOT Remind me <[email protected]>

Subject: You鈥檝e signed up for an MOT reminder for [vehicle details]

Body of email:

You鈥檝e signed up for MOT reminders.

The MOT for [vehicle details] [is due or expires] on [date].

You鈥檒l get an annual reminder a month before your MOT is due, and again 2 weeks later if you don鈥檛 have your MOT yet.

DVSA (Driver and Vehicle Standards Agency)

Unsubscribe from MOT reminders: [link to unsubscribe]

Choosing email or text message

When choosing whether to send an email or text message, consider:

  • which contact details you hold and have permission to use
  • what individual users have said about how they prefer to be contacted
  • the length of your message

It鈥檚 a good idea to use a mix of emails and text messages, especially if the contact details you have are old and might be out of date. For example, you could send an email asking a user to do something. If they haven鈥檛 done it after a week, follow it up with a text message.

You should avoid sending emails and text messages at the same time, unless there鈥檚 a very good reason to do this.

Protect your users from spam and phishing

When contacting your users, you must:

  • leave out sensitive information, like bank details
  • avoid making requests for personal information, like a user鈥檚 date of birth
  • only send links which point to the 188体育 domain
  • spell out any web addresses (URLs) in full to show the user where links are going - for example, /exampleservice
  • avoid including redirects in any links - for example, tracking
  • avoid sending attachments with emails
  • include the user鈥檚 first name and surname in the body of the email to make phishing more difficult

You must also follow technical standards for emails.

How to write emails and text messages

Follow the Government Digital Service (GDS) style guide and write clearly using plain English.

Personalise your messages

Users are more likely to trust information that鈥檚 relevant and clearly meant for them. You should:

  • say who the message is from - consider that the name of your service might mean more to the user than your department or agency name
  • tailor your message - for example, use 鈥榲isa application鈥� for the email subject line rather than something generic like 鈥榓pplication鈥�
  • start emails with 鈥楧ear [firstname lastname]鈥� not 鈥楬i鈥� (you don鈥檛 need to do either for texts)
  • include a reference number and contact details for your service if the user might need to contact you

Be concise

Keep email and text messages short and to the point. Say only one important thing in each message. If you have several important things to say, send more than one message.

Get the most important information across in the first sentence, so it鈥檚 more likely to be read (and to appear in the preview). Remember that email subject lines are often shortened.

Don鈥檛 use jargon or acronyms without explanation.

Give clear instructions

Don鈥檛 explain back-end processes or policy. Give the user just enough information so they know what to do next:

  • make it clear what you need the user to do and include any deadlines - for example, 鈥楥omplete this form and send it back to us by 20 May鈥�
  • say what will happen if they don鈥檛 do what you鈥檙e asking - for example, 鈥業f you don鈥檛 pay by 20 May, you鈥檒l have to apply for a new licence鈥�
  • explain what you鈥檒l do next and when they鈥檒l hear from you - if you won鈥檛 be contacting them again, make it clear that it鈥檚 the end of the process

Example of a personalised message

The Help with Prison Visits service sends users the following message:

From: Help with Prison Visits <[email protected]>

Subject: Your reference number

Body of message:

Dear [firstname lastname]

You asked for a reminder of your reference number.

Your reference number is:

[reference]

Check progress or start a new claim at [service URL].

Regards, APVU (Assisted Prison Visit Unit)

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Last update:

Added examples of subscription, transactional and personalised messages.

  1. Guidance first published